This is cool! Somehow seemingly randomly linked words listed here make up a story... It's hard to describe why I like this, perhaps it's just the general vibe... but I do!

Erisah

Hearts for this poem. I really like the way it flows.

This is really good. It makes me think of a fantasy book or something like that. It's really awesome. I love it.

-Riana Rogue

I swear I've read something else by you with this same title... that was submitted to favonius. Hmm. Still, I like this- the way that it scans, and the clear pattern- I disagree with the previous reviewer- with the summary you provided, this stands on its own just fine. Deine Freundin, Diana.

This feels as if it belongs within a tale of fantasy because of its overly unique wording and peculiar descriptive names. Some poetry cannot stand alone without a surrounding tale or novel, and I can imagine a mage, or necromancer, or sorceror chanting this. It is good...very good...but it needs to find a 'home' within an imaginative tale. Have you got any wonderful ideas for this interesting poem?