Reviews for You Live By the Sword, You Die By the Sword
xxx1000 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Interesting concept, but a bit too short. Couldn't really get into the story.
GRudge chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
This was a great short story. Is there more to this? You could really make this into a longer, and great story!
Avery Rose chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
interesting... fight scenes are difficult to write. About the decriptions at the very beginning, it could use more show than tell... but I absolutely *hate* doing descriptions of a certain kind of dress, so I know it's hard to put into words. Great job building the tension...could proabably use a little more...but I ~loved~ the twist. The ending was rushed, good description in the last paragraph, but I would have rather read more of a show than a tell for the ending. I love small stories, they're so fun to write _
Justokre chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Hehe, interesting. I enjoyed it.
hockeyave07 chapter 1 . 5/14/2002
WOW! sweet story
Miba chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
I love this.
Da Blob 5 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Could be good
The Evil Critic 4 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
This had no plot.. it wasn;'t a complete story, though it was interesting despite your unculcured Description. You could do something with this, with time, and a beta reader
SWR 8 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Hm ... go on ...
Kate 6 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Nice bomb at the end...kinda like my type and style..kinda cheeky...
Kadabra 7 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Not bad.
Sarah 9 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I really liked this story, really cool. A look into the future and the virtual reality games. Good job!
Wolfish grin chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I thought that it was very good. The fighting scenes are always hard to write and keep the action going, but you did a good job. The ending was great. Keep up the good work.