Inner monologue...painful. One comment-it's uploaded as 'Confused Emotions', but it's titled 'A Piece of Sh*t.' (I'm not sure if we're allowed to have cuss words in reviews...)

Anyway, the emotions you put forth into this seem very true. Good job! _

~EG

Will you worship me forever now? ;) This poem is very expressive. Not necessarily poetic but expressive. I think it's great to express yourself though - more important than nice little poetic pieces or suchlike. So relationship trouble? I think you capture the despair and feelings really well. It's such a depressing thought but it's true nobody can ever know exactly how either of us feels, thats the price of being unique.