nice work. your poem paints a picture clearly. some things don't blend together smoothly, but that's okay. ahh good luck with all this... i know how mixed up it can be.

WOw, that was really good. I'm sorry for your loss it sounds like this person meant a lot to you. Good luck keeping in touch.

Wow

A really good piece. My daughter is going through this right now, and I think you express how she's feeling at the moment.

hi Akira Bane or wendy ! i like this poem alot! I hope we can be good

friends . u have a talent for written poems & books. i think u are pretty cool!

i am writeing a book called " Till Death' i will let u read it if u want to

when i get done with it.. well i'm going to read some more of ur poems and storys!

good luck with ur books and poems ... from nate

That reminds me of a Stevie Nicks song..Really good!

*sniff*... I'm sorry for your loss. Losing friends can be tough, but you seem like a person who has the power to go on. Don't let this bad thing keep you from what's good in life. Living.

Akira, could you please give me an e-mail address to contact you at? I'd rather not artificially inflate your readings number - I personally get psyched when I see my numbers get higher - :). The title sounds cool, though it isn't really remarkable, you know what I mean? And of course, it could very well be very meaningful - I haven't read the Harry Potter series. :)

My best friends are either moving away or live far away anyway - I know exactly what you mean. I really like the keystone and arch analogy. :)

~Please people, read and review my works! PLease? :)~

That was mean of you,what you said earlier at my post..Akira,why?It was just a joke..!

I read it again,and I love it..This gets better everytime I read it..Oh,by the way,some dude just made a poem for me..Check it out!Im gonna read it then ask him to read yours ok?

Hey hey..Im back and Id better warn you..That regular Akira girl has NC 17 stuff hehe but its not very graphic

Oh,so pretty..That beads a tear into my eye..Sniffle..Ohh shoot..I wanted to tell ya Ive released another story and Im workin on PARASITE EVE DESTRUCTION,the one that famed me!Have fun..

That was wonderful, I know how it is to lose a best friend.

I wrote this for my best friend Shannon , I dosen't seem like I was ever there for her ,But I was . Her moving has effected me greatly already even now before she has moved . Where shall me and michal get our comic relief , I ask ? Is it only for a year we both ask ? Will you ever come back ? Are you sure ? She never answeared with her heart .