This is an excellent poem!

I know you've heard this before, but I have to say this! Your poem is GREAT!

I can totaly relate. I'm the kind of person that doesn't show their feelings to anyone, so when my best friend found out she was suprised. When her suprise subsided she started begging me to stop.

My defence,

Stripped away,

Scarred and sleepless here I lay

This part of my poem makes me think of the time my friend told me to stop. I felt like my defence was stripped away. I don't know if that was the meaning behind those lines, but that's what i think of when I read this.

The last line I can painfully relate to too. I've been an insomniac for the past 2 years, and when I can't sleep I feel like I'm drowning in my sorrow and fear.

I know I've said too much, but seriously your poem is superb!

This is going to - my favorites

CHEERS!

I liked this. You did well with it! Keep writing.

Oh god, everything is bad enough without parents and other family members not knowing. I hope mine never find out about me. Though, I suppose, I cannot hide it forever.I'm hurting, mostly by my own existence, but I don't want them to hurt because of my poem.

nice poem...it would suck for ur parents to find out...my parents don't even notice it when i wave my wrist in their face...um... *awkwardness*...gr8 writing! lol.

Very dark, very creepy, very good!

Finally, you understand and you rhyme, thats pretty rare. I've come close to cutting- to close. I am fairly sure I understand the feelings behing this work.

When my parents found out, they freaked out.. All I asked was if they put me somewhere, make sure it had internet so I could read poems like this.. Thanks for writing

Another fantastic poem really. I seldom find anything on fanfiction or fictionpress worth reviewing after reading, but these are really good. My hat is off to ya.

Great! I really liked it.

Wow you're AMAZING! Really, you made the poems rhyme, make sense, be artistic and make it so true! HOW ON EARTH DO YOU DO IT!I LOVE YOUR WORK!

wow. scarred and sleepless? you sound like me...that's probably not a good thing.

this was really good. you made my favorites.

now get out of my head and stop thinking my thoughts. ;)

Yep, that's how it is. Once I've cut, all this additional pain has been added because I've hurt ones close to me. Well written!

very good poem, i know how it feels. night is when i ussually cut because its when i need to relax to be able to sleep.

one word: brillaint

Wow... that was really expressive and I loved it... I know how you feel... I know exactly how you feel. I won't preach to you, but I'm here to help you if you want to talk or just vent.

~Laila Lucine, e-mail me anytime... maybe review some of my poems?