Reviews for Yet Another Path
angelina cole chapter 1 . 12/9/2001
I like the comparisons you used, but at first I thought the poem was not a rhyming wasn't as obvious as most are, but after a while I got into the pattern. :) It's a good piece. Yours, ~ångie cole~
LadySaturn don't wanna sign in chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
I love your poetry, please keep it up! I'm getting into poetry because of you! I like to write it now!
Red Rush chapter 1 . 7/26/2001
while it's a really good use of iambic pantameter, i find the sentences are just a tad too long; one could get confused. other than that, wonderful. i know what it's like to move a lot.