This is a cool new way to look at such a cliche topic. It has originality and flare. I enjoyed how it flowed and the strong use of fealings that were portrayed greatly by your word usage.

Write on,

Horse237

just like everyone says, POOR MONSTER! he just needs to eat like everything else. i know im human and all, but hey, imgaine if we were the monsters, so few in their race, and the little people thought they were the highest race and had to do everything so suit them! grr!
anyway, about the poem, it's well written, and you bring out a nice point of view with a cool choice of words!:D

Oh...I like it...Very much

Sad. Poor monster. I think this is very creative in the point of view, and I like the way you handled the subject matter. Very true that many fools will try to be heros, but monsters are rare. I always sympathize with the monsters who are just doing what's natural for them and are then persecuted for it. Good poem, and refreshing point-of-view! ;)

*nods* what would a book b with out a villian. speachly the sexy lot from ljs and labby... ;) i love this poem...

WHAOW! Wow, great! SO cool! LOVE the last line! I am just laughing cuz I love it so much! (trust me, I laugh whenever I get something emotional or something - even sad or scared) I just absolutely love this. Everything fits perfectly.

I've always felt sorry for the monsters...This poem is great! It's all true. Without the monsters there'd be no hero!

Speaking as a legendary monster... hence the name -Dragons-daughter I have to say I like this piece. It represents the Whole of Monsterdome quite nicely. You say, in fiction, what we chant in front of the Whitehouse!

You go boy/girl/person!

Very cool- an interesting take on the whole theme. It is true- the heroes would be nowhere without the monsters.

This is an excellent poem. I particularly like the "where would you be without me?" It really brings the dragon's view into the light of day.

That was beautifully written, with empathy for the dragon and a point that makes a lot of sense. "Do not deceive yourself, slayer..." This stanza was quite powerful, and seemed to sum up the wisdom of the dragon's position. Excellent work! _

This is an excellent poem. A true masterpiece. Keep up the great work. And write more like this! :-)

First time I've seen something like this written from the other point of view. I've thought about it but I'd never have been able to do it justice, as you seem to have done quite nicely.

Keep writing this kind of thing, you do it well.