beautiful &D

"Time always had a thing for love". I don't know why, that line just struck a nerve. That was so sweet, I wish I could know someone for that long...*sigh* Anyway, I loved it.

When are you gonna call?:( I feel so lonely!By the way,I have writers block really,really bad!I feel so dead wahhhhhhhhhhh

this is thought provking...who in the end is a hero? Our bestfriends? Our parents? Or everyoneone we know? About your question...ya that is cool...start it with amazing quote/poem then end it with another...i hope you will write some more poems soon...cause i'm awaiting them!

Friends are one of Life's greatest pleasures. You have really expressed that here. Again, another great work!

Now I've been here twice - had to sign in . . . great poem - run it through spellcheck before you post - spelling errors draws attention away from the emotion of the poem. :) Another minor thing - you might want to make "high tide and low tide" to "high and low tide." Other than that, cool poem - kinda song like - do you sing? :)

~And THANK YOU for reading and reviewing my poems! :) Other people who read this - please do like Akira! :)~

Thats very good!I really liked it,Akira