|Reviews for Unable|
| actoratheart chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
basically i linked to a link to a link... a recommendation of somebody on devART and then, being on FP as well, i thought i'd take a look...
there's a, a -how do you say it?- a sort of stabbing quality to this, the way all the lines are short. this strikes deep, if you know what i mean... i'm kinda at a loss for what to say... /
| Leader of the Mushroom Militia chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Heekers, that's an interesting poem. Certainly good though, and it's thoughtful
| slumberdoll chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
i can relate to this awesome work. ;)
| hOmIcIdAl BUTTERFLY chapter 1 . 8/23/2001
I LOVE IT! its really deep and emotional, and you have TALENT!
| ButtercupHarmony chapter 1 . 8/23/2001
*crying* beatuiful...really describes how I feel. Keep writing
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 8/23/2001
Dah, once again, this seems very song like. Grr! I admire your talent in being able to make a poem sound like a song. At least, to me. I like the jumpiness you have going on, especially with the "I feel" part. It gives it a deeper meaning. You, my friend, have a talent. Don't waste it!
| d21 chapter 1 . 8/23/2001
Um... *searches Dictionary* Uuuhhhmmm... That was... good.
| darkmaze chapter 1 . 8/23/2001
I know how you feel