a perfect combination of emotion u were feeling and literature. The best poets write what they see, the better poets write what they feel.

Personal, yet universel all the same. ) Good work!

that was a really nice poem _ i know how it feels to feel like that. nice job.

this is a fic kinda like my story "Engulfing Darkness"...okay, VERY alike. guess people (we) just like to write stories about darkness. mines is kinda maniacal, yours is sad ( *sniff*

This is undefinable. In a good way though. I think. I understand how you feel, though you think, I'm sure, that no one does, or ever will for that matter. But you, unlike me, can put your feelings to words, and for this, I congradulate you.

I perfectly understand this. Ally _

I know how you feel, I battle the darkness on a daily basis.

uhm... not bad... but could u amend the format ? it's all running over each other's lines :)