Reviews for Feel
Syriven chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Good poem, but the formatting sucks (in my opinion anyway).
My Psychosis chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
It's an ok poem, a little clich, but everything is a little cliche. You formating sucks, the one and two letter lines jsut gave me a headache and made it hard to read. I would change that. But it was ok.
Cobster chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Chillingly good. I love the way the change throughout this poem flows...

I especially like the lines:

still

you're

laughing

while I'm

weeping-

I will

not

become

the thing I

am. . .

Great stuff, very haunting.
Duo Girl too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 10/12/2001
Ahhh... that was good. you know, you should get published! You are really good!
Osidiano chapter 1 . 10/8/2001
This is old... yet new... still cool... .;;
Cerberus chapter 1 . 8/27/2001
I love this poem... it sounds like me (stupid nerves)
Tenshi1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2001
can i just say this? YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER! o.o keep writing. i love it.
Raeveyena chapter 1 . 8/24/2001
also a very good poem..keep up the good work