|Reviews for Shades of Grey|
| Forsakn chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
I agree with your other reviewers. BUT. I like your ideas in this.
| Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
Do the line breaks thing and make it dramatic poetry. Would be incredible. The stage setup rather detracts from the point.
| Manaliabrid chapter 1 . 9/14/2001
Deep but needs more content.