Hm. The last review was harsh, but, well... spot-on.
There are a few things conspicuously lacking from your "story."
1. A plot
2. A basic grasp of the English language
3. A point
4. Humor

That was not literature. That was garabage. You are a horrible writer.

I remember a long time ago, yesterday, when I was sitting in my magical time travelling bathtub, I met a robotic David Hasselhoff. "Go to , and there you will find great treasures." I immediately stepped on the gas to my magical bathtub and drove over David Hasselhoff, which changed the future so Kinight Rider never existed. I drove back into present time, and came to and found this story. So the moral of the story is, if you see David Hasselhoff while travelling through time, listen to what he says, because his sayings will lead you to go stories on .net

This has been an overlong SamandMax rambling

fuck you! i've not rean the fucking fic yet but so what! i think your a mother fucking asshole who can go ta hell! i'm sittin here with my fucking boyfriend's cock in my hot wet slippery pussy. he's rammin me! his just released his sweet tastin cum in my pussy. he's lickin my cunt clean he's kissin it he's suckin it! i shove him back in me and i just reached my climax! and imma jus typin this ta get ya n trouble an fuck ya off.

fuck you,

jess

Yay! And the Lord did grin, and the people did feast upon fruit loops and orangutauns... oh, sorry... GO US!

LMAO...Giggling madly... wondering what u got high on... confused... uh, yah. It was strange, but funny! I love pointless stuff!

This is... DARN funny! And very... flippin stupid! What the... hey diddly hey were you ON? (Whatever it was, I want some...) And... gosh darn it, you should write more! (Was my language acceptable? Hmmm... I tried, really...)

hahaha i remmeber this good work!

Very funny, that was certainly a kind joint