That's so depressing...I almost know how you felt when you wrote it. Good work.

I like it. You say a lot in a few words. -Q'Amundae

wow thats great, the title doesn't do justic to the poem, short but wonderful

Excellent! Real angsty (hence the genre, I suppose). Angst is good. Angst is... healthy.

good job, I liked "forver becomes a dreamless sleep"