hehe...forgot I couldn't swear in a review (note the gap between 'scared the ... out of me')... oooo, and the plot thickens...

sooo sorry for not reviewing this fic sooner! there was something wrong with my computer and I couldn't see them until Mogo sent me the URL... but anyways... this fic scares the out of me... man, it's freaky (in a good way...a good, morbid way...) can't wait to see how it turns out~

Hey you really did follow your horrorscope (bad pun, I know, I'll shut up now) Great chapter Sohpie, see you soon ne? BTW I wonder how long it'll take you to figure out my bad pun...

Well done! Good plot, creepy ending, I liked it. My only complaint is the formatting makes it a little hard to read. You might want to put spaces between the paragraphs, but that's visual. The story is very good!

That was cool...It kind of reminded me of Dogma in a way...please continue it!

Pretty good.

That was really good. It reminds me of that Roddy Pipper movie about those aliens that could only be seen with special glasses. Anyway awesome story.

Great Story Its a cool and original horror story Keep up the great you Review my stories and my new story Evil Living Dead 2: The Underground Village

0o I think you took Yi's suggestion to get more morbid a bit TOO seriously...j/k ;; Now what have I told you about cliffhangers? (NO! Then you leave your poor friend DragonChan all wondering what happens!) Upload that next chapter soon!