Reviews for Hesitation
Jayiin Mistaya chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
Nice twist. I'm always a fan of taking common situations - cliche moments that we all look at and spend so much of our emotion and passion on and then warping them into something new. The critic in me wants to accuse you of being melodramatic, but if I did, I would be a hypocrite. This was very well written, very smooth and very concise. Some of the dialogue seems forced, and the introduction of Beth is clumsy and random, but the way you use her to drive home the ending was nothing short of brilliant.
Dr. Tamwe chapter 1 . 9/3/2001
If anyone knows how to fix the small formatting problem of having the text run off the side, please email me at - I imagine it's distracting to some readers, but I can't figure out what's wrong with it.


PepsiAngel chapter 1 . 8/31/2001
This was soooo good! I loved it. Instant favorite. I hope your teacher give you an A on it! :) Ciao!