Reviews for A Painful Picnic
elizabeth chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
I thought this was great. I've written alot of stuff in my journal that sounds about like this kind of thing. only a couple of typeohs, but its all good. very nice, thank you.
Ryanna Surakame chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
This poem means a lot to me, because it's a lot like how I felt/feel. Thanks for writing this.
Mackenzie Anderson nsi chapter 1 . 9/12/2001
oh wow... this is really impressive. grr im gonna have to sign in and add this to my faves... great style, detail