Aw that is SO adorable!

xx

Ali

loved the story, can't wait to read the sequel, and i'm glad i found another good writer where the romance isn't too sappy and the plot is good.

To be honest this story looked really good,

but I hated the spacing of your paragraphs, and that turned me off from continuing reading.

-first of all i would just like to say that i luved reading this story and dat even tho sum of the parts of the story were unrealistic, i reely REELY like it alot! but there r still some things i wuld like to talk to u about.

im sorry if this may seem a little biased seeing as i am a christian but i thought i shuld say it n e way. not everything that happens in life is fair nor is it all gods fualt. i understand it might be hard for u to understand that but i just want u to noe that it is ok.

i noe this mite not change ur opinion on being an athiest, but god did say in the bible not to do drugs to the point that it affects the people around u and that if u do its a sin, and i am srry to say that it did affect u seeing as now u r an athiest.

i apologize in advance if the next thing i write offends u in n e way for i didnt mean it to come out that way its just wat i think and u dont have to consider it its just that i know i wuldnt sleep rite if i didnt say it.

a thing u shuld think about is if u believe that there is no other higher being such as a god, then why are u blaming his death on god?

i noe there are sumtimes that reely want to question god, like why da hell is their poverty, why DID MY BEST FRIEND HAVE TO die of sum horrible diesease that wasnt even her fault for getting, or why are we being terrorized. but we need to stop and realize wat reely came out of it and how it was caused, becuz in reality half the promblems we face in life have been brought onto ourselves by us. and sumthings like ppl dieing have good effects like they dont have to suffer or that was reely the only way u culd actualy reach out to a person.

now i am assuming that it was ur dad that died from lung cancer seeing as u feel so strongly about it and i am sorry about that.

now if u want to hate me after all this its ok, if u think i am a bitch its still ok, if u want me burn in hell and still be an athiest its ok, i just wanted u to noe that its ok to be sad, and that u hopefully move on from the expierience.

a reader,

ify anene (yes my name is reely ify)

amazing job.

heya, this is a fabulous story, i love it ~ Alenor.

oh em eff gee. I loved this. There is actually a teacher at my school who's name is Mrs. Livingston. cool.

The whole time I was reading this I was yelling at the computer random things like "AH Mr. Walker (Jason) and Jackie MUST get together!" and "I will hunt down and kill this auther if she gets with Nicolas and not Jason!" Yep, nothing like yelling cursewords at your computer at 3 in the morning. :D

I really like the title for this too. Awesome story. I remember The Famous Jett Jackson! I use to love that show. :D

hey i just read everything and i so loved this story! i'm sorry i can't give a better review than this, but i usually only write longer stuff when I don't like something and your story is definetely going into my favorites!

A wonderfully well written story, and may I emphasize *wonderful*! I only spotted a few spelling and grammatical errors, i.e. excepted instead of accepted, etc. This story kept me laughing or at least giggling, and of course the romance was the icing on the cake.

And one personal comment...you were driving me crazy in making him not kiss her until the very end!

wow...*shudder* that was beautiful... utterly beautiful. this is without a doubt one of the best stories i've ever read. i hope u write i sequel, which i think you did, and which i am forever grateful...haha

omg omg omg omg i AM SO HAPPY! i cant stop smiling.. ive been smiling and laughing for like 5 minutes straight now! OMG OMG OMG OMG! there needs to be more! I love it, love it, LOVE IT! oh my oh my you got me all excited :) I could right here for hours explaining how much i love this, but my fingers are already becoming numb.. im going.. to read your other stories :) I LOVE IT.. keep up all of the awesome work! you are an amazing writer, never forget it.

lmao i love this playfulness going on :) awesome so far! yay!

im in class now.. reading this :) haha i love it

haha i like the story :) i want Jason and Jackie to end up together lol.I had to yell at my dad to let me stay on the computer to read the rest of this chapter! cant wait to finish, but i gtg.

i really hate...

the fact that im not reading chapter 5 yet! lol no time to type, i have to GO AND READ! i love it to death!