Reviews for Crying Sky
Oshibori chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
It's more poetry than actually a song, but a song is merely sung poetry, so I understand why you put it in this category.
kalariah chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
Beautiful.. picturesque.. certainly quite a day! I like the idea of a crying sky; it's a very good image.
Eirien chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
This is very unusual, and I love it. Especially the first two stanzas are great, they give such a fresh angle and innovative imagery. It's a good idea to start with these intriguing stanzas, capturing the reader's attention, and then get more and more concrete until the climax in the last stanza. Really good job!
Sallie Beaver chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
wow. i luv the words that u use. ur poems r the best! _
LittleMaggie chapter 1 . 6/2/2002
That was a beautiful story... go Jesus.
LadyArashi chapter 1 . 9/11/2000
That was so cool, I'm a Christian and I loved that. I hope you write more.
Luckfire chapter 1 . 8/7/2000
Wow. I'm not very religious, but that was very, *very* good. Wow.