Reviews for A Moment Of Eden
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
such beauty is usually quite hard to capture, but this is very good. I like how you described just a simple scene.I like the decription of the tree the most, "venerable sculptures migrating to the sky" It has a nice flow to it. You have lots of complex phrasings tho. very lovely.
saber-toothed jellybean chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
*pulls out the thesaurus* lol. j/k. wow. It's such a change to read something with som REAL vocanulary in it! Good job! hm... a bit of repetition with the angel & angelec, ect. But still, I think you have painted a gorgeous picture in my mind's eye with this. :)
MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 11/17/2001
*chuckles despite of herself* I can't help but think that most people need a dictionary to read as they read your poetry, James. Lol... But seriously? This one was very beautiful, and not as dark as your other ones, which is, as you so elegantly put it, "Eros' affectionate ballad of the wind, That sweeping, enchanted touch it can yield." Bravi, James.. Bravi.
MidnightzStorm chapter 1 . 9/30/2001
That was wonderful!