Reviews for Tears
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
cool imagery, especially "as soft as dew" the fact that "my soul is filled with tears" is in two places in the poem, but the first one is placed kind of randomly is strange... maybe repeat it more, take it out of the beginning, or move one to the beginning and one to the end... just a suggestion. this is well done.
Lightning Tigress chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
Wow.I'm reveiwing my own poem. Yeheee.. please R&R.. thax