Wow. I don't usually go for poetry, but after reading this i forgot why. I really enjoyed it. Very nice.

wow...this is better than the shit we read in english lesson *freezes as it gets to the part in au revoir that I (for some scary reason)screams 'MOTTO!'* aahhh...i must read your other stuff your cool _~

*Claps stupidly* I reeeaaally love this poem! *Mutters* Not to mention Gakkun... Well done! *Plays 'Au Revoir' really loudly and sings along*

~*~Don't You See, This Cold Misery~*~

Dark ... I approve greatly.

Introspective. Good. A little happy for my taste. If you want to read some really dark poetry of mine, go to /ego/beautifulagony. But I liked it nonetheless - suicide? Mother's fault? Boyfriend's? Hmmm. We are left wondering.