Reviews for Just a dream
Ady chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
Wonderful piece. The inconstant rhyme sceme really added to the feeling of confusion of it all, but at the end it seemed to have more of a pattern, offering reassurance. Perfect...
ArmyBrat1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
Loved it!
laureli chapter 1 . 9/14/2001
I liked it better than some 911 songs cuz it gives a ray of hope at the end.
empty account chapter 1 . 9/13/2001
It's such a terrible time for America. But your right, somehow it will get better.
Scarlett L. Beckett chapter 1 . 9/12/2001
The lines:


down through the skies,


before our eyes

Were really good. But sorry, after that it was terrible. It had no rhythm...try not to use such big words. There is hope for it if you try to fix it up.