Reviews for This Dark Day
89167 chapter 1 . 12/12/2001
Haunting... I couldn't write a piece about September 11 until October or November, it was so unreal to me... Wonderful poem!
MikauKaiousei chapter 1 . 11/12/2001
That was great. It ends perfectly; I wouldn't be able to tell that you had cut it off if you hadn't said so.
shaveme chapter 1 . 9/12/2001
I feel it. This is powerful, especially while we're all trying to recover from the initial shock. At the end, you took the sadness in the pit of my stomach and transformed it into the anger and rage in a shaking red fist. The abrupt ending did not seem abrupt to me; it was a very appropriate ending. It's good to get that out of your system. You did a good job.
Kitty-Chan Productions chapter 1 . 9/12/2001
...my thoughts exactly. ***Mystic-