oh. eerie. well, it was pretty good. try being more descrptive, i.e. instead of "Every one was up now and the wives were cooking up a feast." you could have mentuioned what was in "the feast". well, otherwise. ok job.

Reminds me of the Roswell crash of 1947 ... was this your theme? Not too eloquently written, but an interesting theme.

I thought this story was really good, Parker. It was really unpredictable. Keep writing. You have a talent!