hey, wow in a few lines you made a really deep poem!... good job!.. if you get a chance check out some of my my work...

This poem is rather sad. I liked it though! :)

beautiful poem and tribute to those who died, nicely done

I particularly like the forth line. It emphasizes my thoughts exactly.

This is very powerful, and it's nice that you decided to share it. Lovely work!

I live in the second biggest city in New England, but it's nowhere near first place on biggest cities... but what about Pennsylvania? That was apparently a mistake... but I love this part... "Angels singing, carrying the dead to heaven." because it give hope to everyone. *listening to instrumental music* Mmm... everything will be all right.

Hey...it's nice...rather hard hitting on the emotional side, though. Please email me.

Raptor.