Reviews for To Tara and Cassie
LadyBlackbird chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
lol... I have a friend like that... I totally get where you're coming from. I like the format of the poem, especially the lines "that you never will achieve/instead you paint this pretty portrait/that only you conceive/that only you can see/that only you deceive" The emotions are strong, too. Good job.

x. Lady Blackbird .x
inquistrix chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
been there...i like your work better when it's in free verse, your emotion spills out a little more, y'know?

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monchilla chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
i can relate i have one ? does this person keep coming back toy you after you told them to go if so i would ad that, But ether way i think alot of people can relate.
phantom12 chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
interesting. ~phantom12~
Glory Night chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
Hey, I can soooo relate to that. I know exactly how you feel!