|Reviews for Goodbye, My Love|
| angie3838 chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Too many elipses; try using some different punctuation because it will make this poem look nicer on the page.
Also... there is a space after the elipsis.
| crazomatic chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
I am going through this right now. Your poem was just what I needed right now, it comforts me. Thank you for this!
| Cathryn Anne chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
I love the emotion behind your writing. I've had to go through the same situation. Amazing piece of work.
| anovelworld chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
so sad and sweet...
| Kitty Love chapter 1 . 9/19/2001
;_; Not being able to hold, touch, feel and share all your actions and your emotions with someone really does suck...*sighs and looks up* always feeling so insicure, so lost...and lonliness and fear do not help at all...u reminded me that. Err...what am i doing? i was supposed to rate...well i think it's nice. not awsome not dull. I like description no offense...;
| The Writing God chapter 1 . 9/18/2001
You never REALLY get any better at losing love. It always hurts, like a punch to the gut that knocks the wind out of you. That feeling...you want to breath, and you can't...it's the same...you want to touch that person, to be around them, but you can't. All the muscles still work, the hand grasps, the body stiffens. “…I catch something of you on the wind, the way the branches sway, the gusty roar and hollow whistle of love’s lost first and last chance. Fondling the deafening roar while the breath of love just gets pounded, I grab at broken seashells…like love’s fine mist, the dew of passion vanquished brings the sunrise.” Love, RDM
| Christi chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
;_; Do you really HAVE to end the relationship...?
| Bella Tragedia chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
Aww! I know long distance relationships suck! I'm kinda in one right now! So I know what you feel like! Great job!
| Kyle Gon Jinn chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
It is hard, isn't it? We'll be okay though. The moments we had will pull us through