Reviews for the girl
Aeris Tin Mirime chapter 1 . 10/27/2002
Very mystical and haunting. An excellent story.
Stardreamer chapter 1 . 1/23/2002
Interesting piece, Kathryn! Sad, but believable. Good job!
Snowshoe Hare chapter 1 . 12/19/2001
You seem to have a vaxing habit of not continuing your stories very far past the first chapter. To make the torment even worse, your writing is intriguing and entrancing. I would peald with the rest for more, but I know how long it takes to write things, and so won't bother to guilt you.
ArwenAria18 chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
It ends there? Say it isn't so! I want more, please pretty! Who exactly is it that she sees? And why cannot her family see him? This was so nicely written, and I want more! Immediately, if possible. Please? Won't you? -ArwenAria18
Kara Angelle chapter 1 . 9/18/2001
whoa! that is creepy, spooky even... I've never heard a ghost storie told as well... again your work is good even if not what I expected from the summary...
Boston chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
More please!
ArwenStar914 chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
Hmmm, this is interesting... that's the only way I can put it. Well written, and mysterious. I can't describe it, but it's good. ) **ArwenStar**
That Heather Chick chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
wonderfully written, but you should add more. :)