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![]() ![]() ![]() Very mystical and haunting. An excellent story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting piece, Kathryn! Sad, but believable. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to have a vaxing habit of not continuing your stories very far past the first chapter. To make the torment even worse, your writing is intriguing and entrancing. I would peald with the rest for more, but I know how long it takes to write things, and so won't bother to guilt you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It ends there? Say it isn't so! I want more, please pretty! Who exactly is it that she sees? And why cannot her family see him? This was so nicely written, and I want more! Immediately, if possible. Please? Won't you? -ArwenAria18 |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa! that is creepy, spooky even... I've never heard a ghost storie told as well... again your work is good even if not what I expected from the summary... |
![]() ![]() More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm, this is interesting... that's the only way I can put it. Well written, and mysterious. I can't describe it, but it's good. ) **ArwenStar** |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderfully written, but you should add more. :) |