Reviews for Hollow House
Ringlet chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Very simple yet alluring. I like it.
Nearly There chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I like this. I love the repetition, it flows really well. I love the note at the bottom as well, warning people that this poem doesn't reflect yourself! That was a nice touch!

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Manna Banana chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
repetitive in a good way
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 11/3/2001
This one makes me think of a blackened heart. It can cause the holder of that heart to be violent and tormented, as well as make that person feel lost. Even though someone may want to escape, it is very hard to lift a black veil from someone's heart. The darkness is absolute, and it leaves the owner utterly apathetic at times. The blackness only makes you see the evils of the world with a keener eye. You may ask for salvation, but your wait will be a lasting, if not permanent, one.
Dylan Nation chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
Good imagery. Cool theme. Nice. :)