luv this story XD

it's so kewl!u gotta write more! keep it going _

I can't believe how much I love this fic. This has to be my favorite shounan ai!(well, tied with Twig's stories..) I love Pheonix! His attitude is so hilarious, and Aether is such an awsome character! I can practically hear nearly everything they say(especially Pheonix). So understand what I'm getting at? Write more! Pleasssse, I love this story!

Wow that was really good! I hope Phoenix answere well be yes well eventually at least _~ You are such a good author your on my favorite author list I love your writing style _

hi

read you story (took 2 days (sorry that should really be nights) and lots of sugger) I _LOVE_ it. really cool story. first story I ever read with shounen ai and there where no drag queens and no abba feeling to it. (I've been somewhat dreeding that in most shounen ai and there for not read them) The storie really got me thinking and as soon as I get home from my parents I'm going to e-mail you. I have so pictures (anime) that this storie reminded me of.

Oh boy... Oo; part one done in lass than an hour! DAMN I'M GOOD! Hahahaha! Anyway.. I WILL finish this.

It has caought my intrest! see ya.

*laughs out loud* "You f*cking bit me!" LoL _ I could just /hear/ him saying that _ hahaha... this is coming along *splendidly,* my friend :) WAY TO MAKE ME FREAK OUT! "So do you love me, Phoenix?" Oh man, this chapter was just... great! One of the best yet, I'd say *eyes sparkle* You're very good at foreshadowing! I /know/ you have the next chapter written, so post it, ne?

MORE MORE MORE! POOR GRYPS...NO HE WOULD NOT WANT PITY...MAN THIS STORY IS FANTASTICAL! I WISH THAT I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS! OH WELL, LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTERS 21, 22, 23...YOU GET THE PICTURE RIGHT! I WANNA READ MORE!

O_O! WHOA! I'm in awe. The characters are well-developed, and the awakening of the Child of Air had me jumping and clapping wildly. That, and the fact that the next chapter isn't up made me scream wildly...*cough* Okay, done now. It's a great story so far, and I trust you'll keep up the amazing work. _

Wow, I don't know what to say. This is a true epic of monumental proportions. I'm hooked on the story. Please do write some more, especially of Aether. He's one manipulative guy, and somehow I like to read about them...

I started reading your fic awhile ago (like at chapter 15, I think?) and greedily read each new chapter... And as of this newest chapter? *sighs* This chapter is beautiful! It's art! Pure art! Art and poetry in the form of words... *another sigh* i wish I could do that. Oh you must continue! ASAP! Your writing incorporates the right amount of romance (ha!), humor, and drama. I wanted to cry during poor Gryps' past, aww! It was so sad! I'm going to stop babbling about how amazing and awesome your writing is (it is!) and just leave you with a big THUMBS UP! and an appeal to continueeee as soon as possible!

whooo hoooo gryps finally came out! come out with the next chapter soon k? and please review my story as well?

Ohhhhhhhh! And you say you aren't good! *twirls* This was *awesome*! I was laughing SO hard at Phoenix, Aether, and Draco _ I found that "situation" hilarious, although I do feel kinda sorry for Phoenix *giggles* Ooh, I like how Phoenix is going to get a job... this promises more in-depthness in the plot! More of Ash? _ I told you before, I'm all for Phoenix/Aether, but Phoenix/Ash could be a funny little diversion *eyes sparkle* I know, I'm a twisted little psychopath. And don't be so hard on yourself! I thought the flashback was GREAT! O_O;;; Creepy, very dramatic, but with that brave, very original flair that I so love in your writing _ It is NOT a badly-written TV drama! It's a superbly-written fantasy drama! There *is* a difference, and amen to that! *applauds* I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh no I'm at the end of the chapter which means I have to wait a really long time for the next chapter(it seems like a really long time when you check for updates every day). THis was a good chapter that showed a lot of insite on Gryps( poor dear). I want to know whats going on with Phoenix and Aether though! Aether is my favorite character I think, but I'm in love with them all! Please continue SOON and don't torture us _~

You know, I have been reading this story everytime I come to post my own and I'm shocked that I haven't reviewed by now. I must say I love your characterization of Aether. He's very complex and I love characters that have layers to them. It makes them more realistic. The whole reluctant attraction thing works well for Phoenix's character. Main characters that have spines can be more interesting than wimpy ones sometimes. I must also say that you have the art of foreshadowing nailed. Every chapter has me wanting more. This Gryps development is killer. Excellent work.

Amazing work once again, Caleyndar-san. This Chapter had me both chuckling at Pheonix's comments and on edge at the wonderful style of this work of FanFiction. The way it is written is beyond words, and the plot is sometimes predictable, sometimes complicated, and always just plain awesome.