definitely good stuff you have here...keep on going!

Please continue writing SOON! I love the plot, the characters, and everything else about this story! I especially like Aether he is so dark and evil and wonderful and misterious :)

Really nice fic, the story sounds somewhat original but its the same old 'Fire, Water, Wind... and other elements stuff', but thats one of the very few 'unoriginal' thing in the fic. the characterisation is real good although all the characters seems to rushed in to fast in the fic without some proper introduction. Another downside is that the whole fic tends to explain to much. You could stretch it alittle to make it more... finer. Well good work I'm waiting for the new chapter.

okay this is going to sound so lame but: I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! please more people have to appreciate this story! ITS ART! Its just...just...so...um, good? yes. read it...reccomend it to all your friends etc. while i'm here, eveyone should read Broken Sky by Chris Wooding, its an amazing Manga novel/series...!

Hmmmm I like u story so far. I loved how Phoenix reacted in those situations and I feel bad for him too (I'm tlaking about the thing with Casimir) Aether is kinda creepy, but he seems cool... I hope to see more soon (*hint!* ;) Ja! ~FS

Hiiii. Me again. I loved these chapters. Things will never be boring with Casimir around that's for sure. The way she latched herself to Phoenix reminded me of a leech. And Chima, oooooh Nellie he cracks me up, he reminds me of myself when I get to laughing over something. I just can't stop. That poor crack about Draco's hair. *laugh* I couldn't believe she said that. I can't wait to see more confrontations with Casimir and Aether, he really does creep me out. He didn't seem to have any qualms about trying to cut her. A reaction out of Gryps, that was surprising, but I feel sorry for him. *I read the spoilers* Otherwise I would probably think the same as you. Also, do you take any fanart? Keep up the fantastic work.

I LOVE IT! *cough* I mean it was a well written story and plot. I only wish i could have a part in it because its soo good. *sigh* I love all the chars, (except Casi, Aether and the other Child's) and i especially love Draco! (he's so serious and cute). Oh poor Phoenix, i hope he beats the snot out of Aether later on.

Heh. Cool. No sex yet? Damn. Don't like that Aether dude... He's kinda creepy... Poor Phoenix... Well... Is good, write more.

(warning, i'm likely to rant) 'kay, this is a very good story. without wanting to upset anyone, i'd say this is a very very very very very very very very dark, harry potter/broken sky/probably something else that inspired both of those-'crossover'. but i know its not of course. you've put so much effort into this...jesus...i don't know what i can say about that. i'll have to put it on my favourites instead...um, that should be it...for now.

You're a good writer, very creative. I usually look down on the whole elemental deal, but you make it work. Good character development, good plot, description.. everything. You've got a damn fine story on your hands, and I can't wait to see how you develop it.

That was soo cool. I absolutely love it already. I love Phoenix's attitude, he's so brash. His reaction to the uniform was hillarious. I just busted up laughing when I read it. Then Chima's reaction to Phoenix was an added bonus. Very funny. Draco and Chima seem like really cool characters too. I can't say much for Gryps yet because he hasn't been in it that much, but his hair is really cool. Aether seems so vindictive. *Giggles* I love that too. Sorry I'm very hyper right now. Overall a very interesting story with unigue characters. (Draco's kawaii, had to say that) I hope to see new chapters up soon. I look forward to it.

I really,really, Really like your story. It's soooo goood! I like Phoenix's attitude! I hope he falls in love with the Child of Soul(i forget his name :)) but first he beats his sorry ass! Hope you write more soon!