Brilliant please update soon :-)

erm...the explination at the end of the chapter didn't really explain much, unless you're continueing it in the next chapter. otherwise, it's cool with all the hyperness and such

This took a long time to read but it was alright. I dont think i will ever read something like that again in my life. because IT SUCKED really bad.
p.s. review mine if u get a chance, im just telling the truth man.

Are we talking about the same Brody here? BTW, I think the chapter title is priceless; "There are more of her species..." LOL, it cracked me up! Yay! Keep writing!

Oh my God. Kali reminds me of my friend Jean. She can be such a bitch! (And she's proud of it!) Hee. She has a license to bitch, and all kinds of stickers. The story is way cool! (Did I just say that? Oops. starting to sound like parents...)

I swear to god! I love your writing! Please hurry with the next chapter.