Reviews for Bus Ride
Pretty Peaceful chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
woah... so clever. do you know what i found interesting about this? the fact that i had to go back and read it again before i could review it... it makes sense and the (sort of) hidden messages are very truthful. i like the whole "few cents more to get to Friendship" very clever. i'd really appreciate if you had a look at some of my work... i've recently undergone a huge new era of my life and am looking for some feedback! no pressure of course. peace and love from holly.
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Another great poem. I love your style. Your poetry is beautiful. Great job!
The Hitokiri Onigiri chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Nicely done - the analogy is amazing. Keep up the good work!
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
Would of Been Nice if I knew what the hell you were talking about. It made

no sense whatsoever

Mystik-chan chapter 1 . 9/23/2001
that was good. I luv all ur work. yep, i luv all ur work
howsentimental chapter 1 . 9/23/2001
So sad...;_;