Reviews for Immature
katiebuggie chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
I can relate. This is awesome. Excellent job
wastedlovexxx chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
I can't say more than brilliant. I really felt the poem and it really got to me as something I can relate to. Don't give up writing and please feel free to check out some of my poems.
Darkangel-mysticat chapter 1 . 5/5/2002
Geeze, you like the 'F' word alot, don't ya? *Grins* No, I'm not giving you a boring teacher lecture; after all, one of my favorite quotes are : 'When angry, count to four. When very angry, swear.' _
Tykeria chapter 1 . 4/25/2002
good song i hear all ur songs playing in my head it won't be long till all the world hears them on the radio
Aiden Merrick chapter 1 . 2/26/2002
:beams: Very true, very good..
The Girl Within chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
You know what I'm going to say, so whats the point? Great songs, as always. Maybe sometime soon I'll get the guts to post my songs, as of right now, I'm content on reading other people's. :-) Keep writing, you have talent.
RyKnOw Starfuct sic chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
Amen to that, as a writer who has mostly put up only

angst type poems I know what your talking about. to date

no one has critisized me for it, but I know that soon it probably

will happen. I like your writing style.

-MT
Sophie chapter 1 . 9/29/2001
Great concept... people acting like they understand a person, yet they don't. Asuumptions are all to existant in this world, and they end up hurting people lots. Good last line. Some people act too much on what they feel, and refuse to belive anything different. Even when someone explains it differnetly. If only people had open minds...and hearts.
Beyond The Pale chapter 1 . 9/29/2001
Youre not immature..just...farf. Stop writing better than me, dangit.
cinnaburst chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
I feel that way sometimes...very well written song ian
Aaron Mason chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
Hey, that is quite good! Please read my song, "If Tomorrow Comes"

I really like this. I'll take a look at your material, and I'll add you to my favs (authors) list if i like what I see.

Your song is on my favourites, by the way. Nice work
GuitarPunk chapter 1 . 9/26/2001
I read this one earlier today when you showed it to me. It's good and sounds good. I think i get it, but I'm not 100% sure. But it's good none-the-less, whether i understand it or not is besides the point...we all know I'm deep like that...
shy chapter 1 . 9/26/2001
i like the song, and i know what you mean. but its odd when someone finally sees through that mask.
Celestina1 chapter 1 . 9/25/2001
ooooooh that is so cool! i love the way you write! dont ever let people put you down and PLEASE dont ever stop writing!
Shattereddreams chapter 1 . 9/24/2001
Ooh I like this one alot :) tis going on my favourites. One of your best so far. yeay _
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