i like this.
It's not about sex is it? Virginity and all that?
sorry, i know its probably not.

Wow, you sure got a way in words...that is so...deep!

*_* dude... you are an awesome writer!

So true...it comes for me, also. Always when I'm not looking, never when I want it. always there where everyone can see it but me...

(sorry. Just a little improv. _ I love all of your writing.)

...that's differnt. It's hard to grasp the meanings, everything could be something else. Oie, it's thought provoking! You shoulda warned me! Very thought provoking. Don't give up on this style, test it out, kay?

oh, wow... really emotional; very true...

Hmm . . . a very definitive mood with this piece. It's like looking at something through one's peripheral vision.