|Reviews for How to Make A Fairy Tale Without Really Trying|
| M. Joseph Armato chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
It's um... It's a valiant effort. I didn't find it very funny. What's up with the spaztic narrator? I get that the narrator's intentionally spaztic, but... it just doesn't work. He (the narrator) reminds me of those attention-loving preppy girls who say, "Like ha ha, I'm so random. Fluffy llama bunny princess!"
Like I said, a valiant effort. I think you tried a little too hard to be funny, and it could be funny if you took the narration a bit slower or something... I don't know.
But anyway, it looks like everybody else who reviewed this loved it. I guess I'm the odd one out.
Good luck in the future,
M. Joseph Armato
| bittersweet345 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Lmao. I hope it's not the end. Ha!
| zephyr mist chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
ooh I like!
| Destiny Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/22/2001
Cute_ and very funny. I'd add it to my fav list, but i think it's still broken ;;;
| Porygon the cyber one chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
*clutches her stomach, laughing*