Reviews for Strange Affection
Lady Silverhawk chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
That was neat.
Vayerly chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Hmm. I once knew someone like that. I don't really know him anymore...
I liked how simple this was. There wasn't really any "flowery" langauge there to take away from the poem, which was good. The only suggestion I would dare to make is to maybe restructure the lines; it seems like some of them are a little abrupt, and perhaps combining them would make the poem flow a little easier. Nice job.
Jimbiny Lupin-Wood chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
It's dark. And oddly romantic. I could picture everything that happened...which, in it's own twisted way, was beautiful.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Very nice... I could picure it, always a good thing:)
Please R&R mine_
The Carrot Princess chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
AAAII! ...that boy... DAMN... he sounds soooooo romantic. Sorry. Soda again...
butterfly chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
I liked the expression you show in writing your poems. But then again it shows how sick somebody can be.
Chiron chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
This is pretty good. So dark... This one's definitely going on the old favorites list!