|Reviews for Goth Applying Makeup|
| Hope.And.What.Not chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
hey i really liek this peom actually i like it so much i was woundering if i could put it on my sight(of course saying it had been writen by you) you can have a look at my sight if u want( . ) i just wanted to put some poems on a page and well this is just perfect
so e-mail me soon about if i can or cant deeply apriciated
| A Very Lonely Monkey chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Gorgeous wording, really. I loved every line.
See, I'm called Goth by my classmates, so I guess I am...but when I put my makeup on, it's more like this:
Black eyelinerpokes my eye,I grope for the faucetand paper towel.
My eye stops stingingand I .Public water is gross.
| C.L.Lauchlan chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
I love it! I love goths, everything about them is elegant, but I'm not goth. I love the descriptivness in this poem, it's awesome
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
o_0. I liked it! Well done!
| SKATENaked-BlindReaper chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
This is really good!
| swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
interesting, this is definitely new, itz well written
| Jewess84 chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
very well written...
| allison tyler chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
this is really good! really really good!
| Maeghan Jade chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Whoa-cool. Nice descriptive phrases.
| Bekll chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
| Spaztic Cheese Not Bothering To Sign In chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Heyho that was really good :D
Keep it up
| Alfsigesey chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
V. choice. I love gothic makeup. Original subject, good use of vocabulary. What can I say? This is ripping.
| darkcorners chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
HA! I never thought I'd see a poem about one of us putting on makeup! Great, next time why don't you write something like, a prep putting on makeup? I find it more interesting...they're weird style of pink. Nice poem though.
| can-friends-really-save-y chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
I have to say I really like this its a really good poem and it captures a side of goth people I never seen many people think i am goth but no i am not i nothing like that.
~Victoria of the can_your_friends_really_save_you
| Heartless Lemon Meringue chapter 1 . 5/4/2002
Mmm, I like it :) Very tranquill and observant.