|Reviews for Outcast|
| Aoifa chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Interesting poem with a bit of a twist at the end. It was a pleasure to read.
| Lelxee chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Wow. This was so short, but it was really good. I almost wish it was longer because I liked it so much. Nice.
| Windsong chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
Nice, thought-provoking piece. The outsider is someone to be pitied and not just scorned, and the last line really made me think. The only criticism I have is that the second-to-last line ("But hints of gold...") breaks the rhythm present in all the other lines, which is a bit jarring. Good job. Keep writing! -Windsong
| Lilanthe not logged in chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
That was very nice. I really liked it. It rhymed well, and it was very true.