I didn't like certain rhymes but the poem flows and that I liked :) ... good job
keltica

Why is reality such a good thing anyway?

I wonder, what drives you to put things up at this, a conglomeration and gloaming of aspiring writers? Is it the lure of others reading your works? It seems it wouldn't be, what with the disdain you seem to hold for most of humanity. It couldn't be for the feed back. Has it become a habit?

Wow, it sounds great! I like your style. Keep going.