Reviews for The Leprechauns' Mirrors
Frederick Waters chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
It is said that you only have one paragraph to keep the reader interested, and you didnt do that in the first paragraph. I'm sure that the rest of the story may be great, but I was bored three lines in.
Kezarahk chapter 5 . 5/12/2003
Hey, this is a lot better than most. I hope you keep working on it.

One suggestion: it's a little boring to read about the same occurance twice, even if it's from a different point of view. (Unless it's a very short scene and the viewpoint shift is somehow critical to the story.) So limit the repititon if you can, even if it means seeing part of the story from only one girl's view.

Still, cute story. Keep it up!