|Reviews for Ashes to Ashes|
| skylines chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
wow- those ryhmes were amazing. I usually don't like ryhmes but yours fit so well with the poem. Bravo *claps*
| Disturbing Enigma chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
I loved the rhyming aspect of this, it had really good flow. Great job.
| Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
WOW...i like this a lot...the rhyme scheme is great and the repeating of the one stanza just brings the whole thing together...great job...keepw riting forever and always...please R&R sometime...
| fading zero chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
WOW..i understand y everi1 lykes it so much...to me..i lyke it coz it brings out a side of me that is usu hidden awae...gd job
shattering glass illusions
| Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
I like this. The flow is very nice and the words are powerful.
| FigureItOut chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
I don't know what to say... this poem is awesome. I love the rhyme scheme and the overall theme behind it. The anastrophe also gives the poem a very rhythmic feel. The repetition of "our flesh...turn into dust". The minute changes keep it flowing well and allow for smooth transitions. I think this poem reaches deep into people and touches their feelings of rage/disappointment with themselves and the world. Perhaps this is why it is so popular? Beautifully written.
| Aaron Carthrage chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
| blood thirst 33 chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I love this poem. Its deep and its going on my favourite list for sure
| wilderness chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Brilliant! That was absolutetly amazing. so deep and it had a real truth to it. (as depressing as that is)lani
| To-Speak chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
this is going on my favs list for sure. the flow and rhyme scheme is awesome... it sounds totally wicked in my head. and its very deep, theres just so much emotion behind it all. i absolutly love this. keep up the good work!
| Day2Dreamer chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
great work! i especially liked the last part...
it was also fantastic how you managed to make the thing rhyme without it seeming as if words had been just plonked there coz they rhymed..
keep up the fantastic effort! it was powerful )
| kittyluver87 chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
oh, i like it. Wow, you're words are just so powerful. Keep up the excellent work!
| hellomister chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
i am impressed.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
I like it alot. The whole poem was great that this
time I don't think I'll pick out my favorite lines.
| DestinZfaith chapter 1 . 2/20/2002
...please, don't ask.
Consider yourself warned...