Reviews for It Had To Be Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've read chapter 1-2, and I think it went WAY too fast. She doesn't reveal anything about her feelings of 'love' for Jake or what she's thinking, and to me she's just 'shock', nothing more. And Crying? There doesn't seem to be a reason... because it doesn't have anything to back it up. Don't rush when you're writing...it messes up the story. This story reminds me of "My Best Friends Wedding". Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, this is one aweome start Jey. Please keep on writing! :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not sure where this is going since i havent met the fiance yet but it sounds good. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! Its really good so far and I wanna read more. PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great beginning! Keep working on it; it has tons of potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Why did you stop THERE? Why does Jake have to be so oblivious? I know, probably becuase that's how the story goes, but I sure hope he doesn't end up with Leanne. Only 2 chapters and I already hate her. I'm so biased. I'm sure you're probably busy with "Opposites Attract" story, so I won't beg you to add more right away, but I hope you continue this eventually. I like your style of writing. |
![]() ![]() Why don't you continue this story? Please do because it's very interesting! |
![]() ![]() I like it. keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaahh! Jake is such a dork! I love him! You must continue! |
![]() ![]() That sounds excellent! I love the storyline... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got me hooked! I like it a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good. dont abandon it. what kind of last name is henderson (jk)? |
![]() ![]() that was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see My Best Friends Wedding on the horizon but i LIKE it |
![]() ![]() Very good story, WRITE MORE! ;) |