Hey I liked it! You can do both (poetry and fanfic) you know! I thought it was inspiring.

Lovely work! It's really cool that you write about the simplicity of life, because most often those are the things that are overlooked. Keep writing!

you should do both! you're a great writer!

It has a really good message to it, I think you should try to work on run on sentences, poetry is something that comes from what you feel, and if that's what you felt, I can't say it's wrong! _

Hey Amy, that was an AWESOME! poem :) WAY TO GO! :) hehe

"If you have never sat in front of the fire with steaming hot chocolate and marshmallows

On a cold winter night and were just thankful for all the things you had And felt safe, secure, and warm..."

I loved that part! :) hehe

*sniff sniff* Oh, that was so BEAUTIFUL! It's really good, pure and simple. Fave line: Thunder & Lightning Angels bowling. LOL! This is *so* going on my favorites list! _