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Reviews for
Werehouse
First-Chair-Flute
chapter 1 .
4/6/2004
i gues thats wat u call a REALLY short story but it could really be developed much better, especially the school day and teachers (more PLOT! more description [i know u didnt feel like bing descriptive])