Reviews for Onyx Crystal
Christine chapter 1 . 2/10/2002
I'm going crazy over your stuff! weaaaii! One question though: Why is the poem called Onyx Crystal? hmm... maybe i'm missing the point. Give me a discription of an Onyx Crystal.. it reminds me of Pokemon . .'
kupomo chapter 1 . 12/31/2001
Absolutely marvelous. Love the poem, it's just so full of all this pent up emotion. It's almost as if even if you wear their skin, they know that you are not one of them. They can't see through your lies, but they know that you are broken.
lilias chapter 1 . 10/10/2001
you know if something was bothering you, you could just say it instead of writing this dark depressing poem. Love your descriptions though, very beautiful. But you know you can talk to me, you do have mouth.

(you might want to change to last line of the first paragraph from "give in" to "give out" that gives a crisper image. Or you could always simply and say break, but whatever.
Marcus Cox chapter 1 . 10/9/2001
this was really good. i feel like this all the time. very well done.