This is really neat. Kinda makes me wish I could go back to that good old playground.

thats an interesting poem, it seems dark and light at the same time to me, the imagery is calm and clear. I like this poem, its quite original from what Ive seen. Good Job.

So true. I love playgrounds.

Just FYI, your third line (cool though it is) doesn't seem to fit quite right after the first two. I think it's because it has an active verb (ie: the shadows are creeping) while the first two sentences are merely descriptions.

:) Thanks for the poem!

Hey, kewl poem. " Makes me remember the good ole' days. _~"

Very evocative. I like the way you've used images of innocence to begin with, and used them to bring out this darker, more taboo side. Very good indeed. J -X-