woa... Your poetry is amazing... simply amazing... Could you please R&R some of my work? it would be greatly appreciated...

I think this is a great improvement in your work. The imagery in this is highly original, and you time the lines well. Well done.

wow..this is soo good..so so good..

I like this a lot... Paints very vivid pictures in my head. - I like the way you took 'the end of the beginning', something people normally overuse, and followed it up with 'and starting all over again'-that line combines so well, and makes it more your own thing. Very very cool poem.

Oh, I like it.

Wow, that was REALLY good!

First of all,I'm a sucker for poetry in first person..:)The structure is beautiful. I also believe it's truthful-I believe you stand proudly for what you write. I say it's WELL DONE xxx.

0_o Very interesting. Different ending as well... hmm, ya got me thinkin' now. _** Nice poem, it's... thought provoking. Get an A?

great poem