|Reviews for Help Me|
| just baja chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Wow, man, that was soo cool.
Really I am so serious it isn't even funny good job.
Really, I really like how you made it like one emotion turns into another and you define it.
This was really Super Fantastic! -
More than you'll ever know.
| Burnin Heart chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Wow... the poem was awesome, the last bit was a bit expected, but it was a lovely poem. I like your style and the way you captured the whole depression thing.
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
Great poem. I like the way you blend into the different emotions!
| MichelleW chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
I can relate to this on a very personal level. Very well done!
| Chisa and Neko chapter 1 . 9/24/2002
neko: *blink blink*
adrienne, are you impying something? i hope not. this is very, very, VERY depressing for you!
but i still liked it!
| kawaii-kiwi chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
I really the structure of one adjective leading into the next; very well done!
| Maddox chapter 1 . 10/18/2001
Very nice, you captured the angst well.